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Sunday, July 1, 2012

175. Two Minutes

This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 29; the 29th Edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The topic for this month is 'TWO MINUTES'.
Veer Bhadra Sing is sitting in the courtyard. He is just sitting. He has been doing nothing else but sitting and waiting. The Sunlight is warm and he is enjoying it. It reduces the cold that is entering into his bones. He is waiting for what?

Since when is he sitting alone like this? For how long - he does not remember. It seems that for ages, he is just sitting there; waiting something to happen. If someone asks him ‘what he wants to happen’- he will not be able to say anything. He has not spoken to anyone for a long time. Rather he wants to talk to but there is no one around.

The other day some people came to his home and asked many questions. He could follow only half of them and could answer very few of them.  They were asking about his age. How could he tell that? He is old – that much anybody can see. He has lost his wife long ago and his two sons died due to some illness. His daughters (two? or three?) were married to boys in nearby villages but he has not seen any one of them lately. Have they all died? – He does not know. Now only two of his grandsons are there; who come to village occasionally. They never send him any money. Maybe, they too are poor like him- he thinks.

Those unknown people were also asking about his home, his land, whether he has TV and what not. He wondered whether they could not see themselves that he is poor and he is hungry. He has nothing in home to cook for. Earlier his neighbors used to give him a rotee and subjee – they in their own way used to take care of him. But now they too have grown old. Veer Bhadra Sing has not seen any of them for many days now. He is not sure whether they are dead or alive.

Hunger is spreading in his veins. He wants to eat something – anything. He closes his eyes. He smells Chawal and Daal. He smells hot rotee and his favorite baingan subjee. Aroma of hot tea hits his nostrils. His lips make an involuntary movement to sip that tea only to realize that he is sitting alone and hungry.

Everything around seems deserted at first glance. Then Veer Bhadra Sing realizes that he has lost his vision and hence cannot see what is happening around. He has not been able to hear anything. Maybe the world around is as colorful and as live as was in his young days – only his capacity to experience that world has diminished. Only if somebody spends two minutes with him now and then, things would change! But alas! Nobody seems to have two minutes to spare for him.

Suddenly Veer Bhadra Sing realizes that he is waiting for death. But the Lord of Death is a brute. He visits those who do not want him. And those who want him to come and pick them up, he invariably makes them  wait.

Veer Bhadra Sing feels helpless. He wants to die, he desperately wants to die.
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“Sir, a case of hunger death”, Nitin calls his news editor.

“Well, what is it?” news editor has no time for more details.

“Sir, I am in village Ashoh, district Banda i.e. Chitrakut district in Uttar Pradesh. A man has apparently died of hunger.” Nitin continues.

“Man, cut it short. Tell me one thing. Is it significant?” News editor.

New editor has not time. He is working in a ‘cut throat competition’ environment. He is weary of this young generation recruits who think that media coverage can bring in social change.

“Sir, he was an old man. Apparently he was alone; nobody to take care of him.” Nitin is not stopping at all.
“Old man! What caste he belongs to?” news editor asks.
“Caste? Sir….. Well, I do not know.” Nitin is suddenly apologetic. “But Sir, this shows our apathy to old people. Does it mean once people cross their productive age; we should just let them die? What is government doing – with crores of rupees being spent on ‘old age pension’ scheme? What are NGOs doing? What is society doing?” Nitin continues.
“Listen Nitin. You have a 30 second byte”, News Editor is clear of his priorities.

“Sir.. but listen … “ Nitin wants to say something.
“If you get caste of the man, if you get political equations covered in right manner, you will get two minutes, two full minutes.” News Editor emphasizes.
“Come back to me in five minutes”, barks News Editor.

Nitin is aghast.
Two minutes!
Nitin thinks bitterly of his profession, of the insensitivity of his clan, of his compulsions to be part of the rat race, of his ruthlessness ….

He overcomes his weakness. This is an opportunity for him, he can’t waste it.
Nitin knows that two minutes’ byte would give him a break. He has to catch those worthy two minutes which might turn out to be the greatest moment in his short career. This will help him to grab better job.

He turns around to the crowd and throws questions at them.
The aim is clear: 
Make a story worthy of Two Minutes. 
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30 comments:

  1. Aativas, nice story, i liked the way "two minutes" were used in different contexts for diff individuals .. nice.. ATB

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  2. Nice story Aativas, ATB for BAT

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  3. Dude!! I totally love the way you bring up serious matters every time in BAT. For me, you are the best topic-interpreter always :)

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  4. Excellent Aativas! Our apathy to the old as well as the ways of news orgn.s both covered in one contest post. Superb!

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  5. Thanks Menachery, Vikas, viva_andya and C Suresh.

    viva_andya, I guess I like to bring serious topics on the board and I take every BAT as an opportunity to talk loudly.

    Suresh, the 'connects' that we create in the society are very important in resolving the social problems. Unfortunately, it has its specific agenda!!

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  6. "Nobody seems to have two minutes to spare for him"

    बेहतरीन पोस्ट
    विषय से पूरा न्याय किया है आपने

    जिंदगी का असली चेहरा यही है
    यहा मौत तक बिक रही है
    जो मौत वोट लाए
    या नोट लाए
    उसी पे समाचार है
    वरना मरना भी बेकार है

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  7. WOW Aativas ! what an interpretation of 2 mins !

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  8. Nice post Aativas and all the best for BAT-29

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  9. Is there any limit in terms of length of the story in the present scheme? If yes, such subject should not be there. The writing shows tremendous potential, and then it is wasted. Limit in terms of length, or expediency in terms of deadline could be the possible causes behind it. But the result is...
    Apologies for this response.

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  10. Excellent Aativas!

    //what caste does he belong to..//

    wow, what are you doing here?? You should be a writer man! :)

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  11. Shashiprakash Saini, thanks, your words capture it so nicely.

    TTT, interpretation matters - isn't it?

    Thanks Engram.

    Anonymous, thanks for your candid feedback. You don't have to be apologetic when you don't like my writing! I appreciate and value such opinions.

    Kappu, I guess I am trying to be one :-)

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  12. The second part of the story seemed less striking than the first one. Overall..a nice story. Good luck!

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  13. Hi Aativas

    Brilliant interpretation of the topic. You have depicted the sad plight faced by the old men and women in our nation very well. And the second half on the news channel was brilliant as well.Good Luck

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  14. I like it when people deal with social issues in blog competitions. This is a winner. The use of the present tense to begin with is very good story-telling.

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  15. Diwakar Narayan, thanks a lot for your candid feedback. I hope to improve upon next time!

    jaish-vats, thanks a lot for suggesting such an interesting topic.

    Sandy, glad you liked the use of present tense. Actually I always get confused about which tense to use - past or present!!

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  16. Hi Aativas,

    What an interpretation on the topic! I would say the best post of the edition. I'm sure you are gonna win this.. All the best again!

    Someone is Special

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  17. I really liked the beginning. I mean the way you depicted the old guy was just speechless. I could see his plight in front of my eyes
    Amazing! :)

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  18. Thanks Someone Is Special, rohanabstractedly and JJ.

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  19. That was a hard hitting take on the theme...in fact, the best according to me... :))

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  20. Thanks Panchali for your encouraging words.

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  21. Brilliant commentary on the state of affairs

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  22. Nice one.Kind of reminded me of the movie peepli live.

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  23. By the way, I noticed you have done 175 posts since you prominently put post numbers. I have done 178 posts. Last week when you posted this I would have been on 175. Since I remembered winning my first Blog-a-ton immediately after your first win and inducted into Blog-a-ton hall of fame along with you, I was curious when you started blogging. I found you have started in Aug 2008 while I have started in Apr 2008. I found the parallels interesting.

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  24. Thanks magiceye and The Fool.

    The Fool, well, the parallels are indeed interesting.

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  25. It is the truth that you speak of. It can be viewed from so many different perspectives. A time of cut throat competition this could be viewed as something positive, attitude of the editor can be viewed negatively! Oh so many ideas! Anyhow good job with ur take on the topic :)

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  26. Thanks Richi for your kind words. Things, words, situations always could be interpreted differently - creating differential impact - that is what I wanted to emphasize. I am glad that you liked it.

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