This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 40; the fortieth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton. The theme for the month is "MAKE A WISH"
“Make a Wish to Mother,” ordered the Master.
The young disciple faced harsh realities of life. Initially
he had requested his Master to pray for him. He was a beloved disciple of the
Master “I cannot ask Mother for mundane things,” replied he.
Disciple went inside the temple. He felt the presence of the
Mother. He understood why his Master could not “ask for him”.
“Mother, Give me Knowledge
and Devotion” – he prayed.
Second and third time.
“Your people will never be in want of plain food and clothes”
said the Master.
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देखन में छोटी लगे घाव करे गंभीर
ReplyDeleteसुन्दर और सटीक रचना
ज्ञान और निष्ठा जीवन के रत्न ही तो हैं
इनको मांगने में कोई बुरे भी नहीं
धन्यवाद शशिप्रकाशजी
DeleteNice one.......short and deep !!
ReplyDeleteThanks binzy.
DeleteWonderful Aativas ... just wonderful ..
ReplyDeleteMy entry - Vikas Khair - Wishes
Thanks Vikas.
DeleteWhere Maa Sraswati resides, Maa lakshmi always follows..so beautifully written.
ReplyDeleteVery true. I have heard this concept that those who worship Saraswati are not supposed to worship Laksmi .. and during Deepavali they do not have the customary Lakshmi Poojan. That is a fantastic approach, I guess.
DeleteSmaller the weapon, deeper it penetrates...and your composition is the perfect example of this, beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteYep, Drabble has its strengths :-)
DeleteKnowledge is the greatest power in the world..
ReplyDeletenice one :)
All The Best for BAT :)
The incident itself is powerful ...
DeleteLovely.
ReplyDeleteThanks
Deletesmall,sweat and sharp,it's really effective writing
ReplyDeleteYes, I like this format.
Deleteshort and crisp :)
ReplyDeleteThanks
DeleteVery well written. The brevity gives it the punch!
ReplyDeleteThanks Akila. The original incident in itself is so powerful :-)
DeleteWow!
ReplyDeleteAmazing, aativas... in short you said a lot!
:-)
Thanks.
ReplyDeleteNice thought expressed there...
ReplyDeleteAll the best for BAT!
My entry:
http://www.locomente.blogspot.in/2013/08/best-days-of-my-life.html
Very beautiful...! “With great knowledge comes great responsibility” is a quote that comes to mind.:)
ReplyDeleteATB for BAT!
Im yet to attempt a drabble, n evrytime i read urs i get inspired.
ReplyDeleteeffective drabble with learning...i was like 'Ohhh!'
ReplyDelete:)